Film pitch Feedback

Clear Genre, Themes, Message?

·         Period drama, suffragettes. (Our Rights)

·         Period drama very difficult to do.

·         Period drama give insight into past. History and present

·         Why sci-fi? (Women’s Rights)

·         Period drama/new idea

·         Period drama/sci-fi

·         Yes, shows clear ideas but genre is slightly unclear.

·         Clear genre and good theme. Powerful message

·         It seems very similar to the film ‘Suffragettes’

·         Period Drama

·         Period Drama 1900s

·         It is clear that it is a period drama

·         Period Drama 1800s

What is the narrative?

·         Suffragettes – make sure it is still kept interesting

·         Split between 2016 and 1800s

·         Suffragettes

·         Feminist, could be interesting if done well

·         Interesting but predictable narrative

·         A young woman goes back in time to see her grandmother

·         Comparisons between suffragettes and modern time

·         Gets flashbacks

·         How are you going to show the modern woman doesn’t want to vote?

·         Comparisons with time periods show good insight of how present day is taken for advantage

·         Girl who gets flashbacks of grandmother fighting for right to vote

·         Women’s rights. Natural drama 

Interesting Characters?

·         Two actors, great great grandmother, 2016 woman

·         Characters not fleshed out

·         Ordinary characters give relation to real life

·         Relatives, rounded values, past is most interesting

·         Girl with flashbacks not fleshed out

·         Needs developed characters to make storyline interesting

·         Could be more developed not a lot of personality described

·         Interesting and unique characters

·         The characters have significant roles

·         One with flashbacks has interesting life/past

·         Interesting characters

·         The differ from each other

·         Flashbacks make the characters more interesting 

Does it match the target audience?

·         Sounds suitable

·         Aged 12/15 because of intensity

·         Everyone- use of social media

·         12, would have to be the more mature end

·         Undecided

·         The target audience is suitable and the plot will draw the expected audience

·         Good, suits the target audience

·         12+, perhaps a more interesting plot for younger viewers.

·         Young women

·         Older audience, quite educated

·         Target age = teens, educated in history

·         12 -  not many 12 year olds will be interested in the theme

·         12

Institution

·         Undecided

·         Film 4

·         Small production companies + flim4

·         Low budget, external locations 

·         Pathe

·         Film4 + own production. Realistic and unique

·         Undecided

·         Film4 fitting as it makes historical films

·         Flim4

Any comments about the film, would you watch it, is it doable and interesting?

·         Would you be able to achieve the correct costume for that time?

·         I would watch it

·         IS doable as it is a local location and is planned out

·         It could have a more exciting plot

·         Could involve more interesting plot line to attract more viewers

·         Good settings

·         Very original idea, dependent on mise en scene

·         Could be doable

·         Interesting, good location idea